- I wrote this as a Creative Piece for an assignment at Grade, December 12/08 ...
it takes a little thought, but most should figure it out, don't be afraid to comment, ask, I'll be all to glad to explain !
You Know Who You Are, All Five
There was this moment, perfect and eternal.
It was happiness and passion.
There was a yearning for some sense of my purpose there.
I saw her, and was immediately awestruck, without expression, and at loss for words.
I felt full, and complete, and terrified at once; to consider the future here was folly, a fools venture.
To look into your eyes was to see wonder, fear, and awe; was love there yet?
I remembered a loss, and another I'd not held in years, and vowed to be better.
Each second was infinite.
I believed in perpetual potential there and then; you alone gave me hope.
On days like today I wonder where I've failed you, how far removed from that moment are we?
Have I let you down? Had my father taken more time with me, would I be more forgiving?
I hope that my scars are lessons learned, dues paid on your behalf.
God willing, I leave this as a road map for you.
There was this moment, perfect and eternal.
It was happiness and passion.
There was a yearning for some sense of my purpose there.
I saw her, and was immediately awestruck, without expression, and at loss for words.
I felt full, and complete, and terrified at once; to consider the future here was folly, a fools venture.
To look into your eyes was to see wonder, fear, and awe; was love there yet?
I remembered a loss, and another I'd not held in years, and vowed to be better.
Each second was infinite.
I believed in perpetual potential there and then; you alone gave me hope.
On days like today I wonder where I've failed you, how far removed from that moment are we?
Have I let you down? Had my father taken more time with me, would I be more forgiving?
I hope that my scars are lessons learned, dues paid on your behalf.
God willing, I leave this as a road map for you.
- it's definitely, deeply personal. I hope you like it, I'd be glad to respond to any questions ...
-Glasses Start Friday, Prayers Appreciated !
Love, S.
1 comment:
Love is truly a wonderous thing. I believe it will take a lifetime to begin to understand even a portion of what love truly is.
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